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Tuesday, 3 December 2013

The Bush

THE BUSH 

 Name:Kamaka Tarawa II 
 I couldn't wait to leave to school I was Satisfied I watched my friends go.I just went after Simon coming past,I was walking with my sister Tiere,Aja and Waiari,They were sad of me going to camp and when we arrived I found out that we had to meet at the hall then I saw luggages and everything like Food supplies. I went to see what’s going on Me,Tim Fi,Tim Fa,Arapeta and Sake had to Carry the food and peoples luggages.

After when the bell ring everyone went inside and we all had to meet in the hall,we all said our Goodbyes to our families and friends and we did a prayer in Maori a Karakia.After we got to the bus and waited to go. We all waited even the teachers and we waited to put all the food and everything in the bus after they called us to get in the bus and Ms Hansel said “All settled” She hopefully said and we replied “ Yes” we Humbly said and we were off waving to the parents and our little brothers and sisters and I hope we do fun stuff there. 

 We were half way there and the tire pop like a balloon the bus stopped,Cars rushing through us and then there were hardly anyone coming past,everyone was devastated.The bus driver checked for a tire and there was completely nothing we tried calling for help but there was no reception.We were lost in the middle of the bush I said “Where we gonna go now?”I said in a unpleased voice we all said if we could walk back most of us refused. 

 We went walking into the bush we carried food supplies with us.we were trying to survive but then we found a waterfall I forgot the name of the waterfall but we were saved I thought but in my mind I thought no one would come and it actually happen so we went of walking up the hill we kept on running and walking then we found quite a few of people and we found the way to the campsite and the bus was there and the leaders.

 I was so embarrassed how we came in mud and leafs on our faces and Mr Minton said “Hit the showers” He said like he was a coach of a football team or something and we did,all the dirt and that came off and after we had a Activities and we were too tired so we went to watch a movie and that was it. 

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Thursday, 16 August 2012

The Monstrous Vicious House

One scary night of terror,the moon was full of dark clouds covering it like the moon would not shine.It was halloween,on a wednesday the 31 of October the time was 6:00,and it was a cold night,and then after coming back from school from detention Then I miss my bus and then it got dark and then kids running past me like they couldn’t wait to eat candy.I was very cold as ice,it was a good place but it  was a darkness place too,and “it was called the monstrous vicious house”then as I was walking  I saw a person at the window he looks like he was very worry   and I realized that he will think that I will come inside’’the mysterious house”then kids,were wearing costume and it was a disaster but no kid never knocked at the door or go near the house.

“The house was made in 1854 and The place was in panmure in New zealand,auckland It last forever One thing was the problem we can’t put it on fire or destroy it and it was made of wood and the year was 2012 it was cursed for many years and century”
And then I was looking at the place,and it the was a place of horror,and this little boy ,called matt he cross the street could tantric street he ask me beware the house and he disappeared and it was very quiet and all that I heard was doors opened by itself,and the house groaning and hearing wolf howling to the moon then I saw the gate that was made hard medal,as it opening like I was welcome and the gate had two pale gargoyles,and they had vicious red eyes and I couldn’t see the sign and it might of said do not go in the house.when I took a step then the two pale gargoyles,looked at me like they couldn’t wait for me to go inside the house and the gate closed as possible and I had nowhere out .

And as I entered the house I was frightened,I saw the house right in front of me like I didn’t move but I was getting closer,as I was about to enter the house something was calling my name deeply sound as I entered the house to investigate the monstrous vicious house as I entered I heard something screaming in the basement,so I walk inside the house and saw pictures,and mirrors,and other thing that are in the house,and I saw a ghost passing like it did not see me from my distance.

Once the ghost went,past I saw a ultimate sword called  scorpion of destruction Then I saw a scary doll on a old bike riding to me, then I used my powerful sword to chop his head off.Then I saw the zombies,rise out of their grave,the mist Of darkness Rise them out of the darkness of terror.

I was outnumbered by zombies I saw my sword glowing like I was the one to use it. It became invincible and I realized I could use  the sword of power. I was getting to use it.



“the sword was made in 1570 it would never rusted or brake and it  was made by a scientist called dr manly”
I went outside and the zombies were in the backyard trying to be free and then I started to use my sword and i started to run at them with power of destruction and chop every last head.Once I used the sword i was covered with blood then I saw the person at the window and I went back inside then I  was not covered in blood like once I got inside and I was very clean,then I heard the scream again then I went in 7 rooms one room had a little girl crying with blood of tears then I try to communicate with her then I touch her and she roared with horror then she comes after me and I run outside for my life then I saw the person that looked at me but he  was telling to go and never come back again then i said No i need to know who is in there Then he said it was his child screaming then one of the gargoyle fly me to to the street then i realize that it was a bad night then the sword was mine.

and i went home and i got to go to sleep and I realise I know that I can’t go to the house and then I went to school then I missed my bus then I went to walk then I went to have a look at the house all that I saw was the sword then the gates were open then I had a look around for evidence,then there was nothing but gravestones and grass.

Then I went to school  and and I went to have a look at another place and it just looked like it was very scary then I saw school  then after I went the place called my name several times then a ghost grabbed me very hard and pulled me as I was yelling for help and I grabbed the gate then the gate closed and then I let go of the gate and I was in the house for a month  and I was scared,then I turned into something horrible, and I was haunted for years and I can not come out of the house and it was scary as anyone imagine then I saw kids coming to the house throwing rocks and it was a big horrible feeling and it was the end of the story or is it.