THE BUSH
Name:Kamaka Tarawa II
I couldn't wait to leave to school I was Satisfied I watched my friends go.I just went after Simon coming past,I was walking with my sister Tiere,Aja and Waiari,They were sad of me going to camp and when we arrived I found out that we had to meet at the hall then I saw luggages and everything like Food supplies.
I went to see what’s going on Me,Tim Fi,Tim Fa,Arapeta and Sake had to Carry the food and peoples luggages.
After when the bell ring everyone went inside and we all had to meet in the hall,we all said our Goodbyes to our families and friends and we did a prayer in Maori a Karakia.After we got to the bus and waited to go.
We all waited even the teachers and we waited to put all the food and everything in the bus after they called us to get in the bus and Ms Hansel said “All settled” She hopefully said and we replied “ Yes” we Humbly said and we were off waving to the parents and our little brothers and sisters and I hope we do fun stuff there.
We were half way there and the tire pop like a balloon the bus stopped,Cars rushing through us and then there were hardly anyone coming past,everyone was devastated.The bus driver checked for a tire and there was completely nothing we tried calling for help but there was no reception.We were lost in the middle of the bush I said “Where we gonna go now?”I said in a unpleased voice we all said if we could walk back most of us refused.
We went walking into the bush we carried food supplies with us.we were trying to survive but then we found a waterfall I forgot the name of the waterfall but we were saved I thought but in my mind I thought no one would come and it actually happen so we went of walking up the hill we kept on running and walking then we found quite a few of people and we found the way to the campsite and the bus was there and the leaders.
I was so embarrassed how we came in mud and leafs on our faces and Mr Minton said “Hit the showers” He said like he was a coach of a football team or something and we did,all the dirt and that came off and after we had a Activities and we were too tired so we went to watch a movie and that was it.
The End
I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 7 and my teacher is Ms Ah Kui.
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Tuesday, 3 December 2013
Wednesday, 28 August 2013
Winning the Race
The days of my hard training has come to it's fate, my competitors are now my enemies that I fear. My heart pumping with intensiveness and nervousness that I felt that everyone could hear it.
I walked with pride and joy knowing this is the chance of a life time to represent my country New Zealand,that symbolism on my strong healthy body.
I looked up to the people as they cheered my name. Their faces were bright, smiling, and giving me the best wishes that only could be seen in their eyes.
The smell of the stadium was fresh and the air was full of excitement and anti participation who was going to win.
I reached to the rest of the competitors as we prepare ourselves to move to our places to represent first and foremost themselves, their families and their country, so proudly wearing their country's colors.
My heart pumps with excitement and my all my years of training and dedication to the sport that I am truly passionate about. My focus is in automatic gear and I know this is about giving my best.
However negative starts to build up my feelings of fear quickly enter my thoughts which surrounding within the dark images in my head. I quickly pushed that to the pavement and regained the positive affirmation that recorded in my head "Go hard or Go Home" it echo severals time to enable myself to come back "I don't have time or the place for this I was born to run and running is what I am doing right now.
I am representing my country, as I echoed this my National Anthem played as the singing from the audience rang through my head and I knew from that point that they were here for me yes Me, they believed in me and they were here to show their support our Country, which I am representing, my emotions grew and I knew that I was here to WIN.
The race is on and I got myself mentally and physically ready.
All the competitors were on their running blocks as we could feel each other heart beat with nervousness.
The officials were ready to trigger their pistol, and suddenly they was huge bang in the air.
We ran as fast as we could I could hear myself breathing in and out slowly and other competitors were losing their breathing stances which slowed them down.
I quickly concentrate on myself, feeling empowerment that I was the only person running in this competition, my voice in my mind spoke to me so loud that it shut out the crow I ran my hardest to the finish line and I made
it, I did not stop running, the officials came running after me to give me first place.
I looked into the audience and shouted "I made it".
I walked with pride and joy knowing this is the chance of a life time to represent my country New Zealand,that symbolism on my strong healthy body.
I looked up to the people as they cheered my name. Their faces were bright, smiling, and giving me the best wishes that only could be seen in their eyes.
The smell of the stadium was fresh and the air was full of excitement and anti participation who was going to win.
I reached to the rest of the competitors as we prepare ourselves to move to our places to represent first and foremost themselves, their families and their country, so proudly wearing their country's colors.
My heart pumps with excitement and my all my years of training and dedication to the sport that I am truly passionate about. My focus is in automatic gear and I know this is about giving my best.
However negative starts to build up my feelings of fear quickly enter my thoughts which surrounding within the dark images in my head. I quickly pushed that to the pavement and regained the positive affirmation that recorded in my head "Go hard or Go Home" it echo severals time to enable myself to come back "I don't have time or the place for this I was born to run and running is what I am doing right now.
I am representing my country, as I echoed this my National Anthem played as the singing from the audience rang through my head and I knew from that point that they were here for me yes Me, they believed in me and they were here to show their support our Country, which I am representing, my emotions grew and I knew that I was here to WIN.
The race is on and I got myself mentally and physically ready.
All the competitors were on their running blocks as we could feel each other heart beat with nervousness.
The officials were ready to trigger their pistol, and suddenly they was huge bang in the air.
We ran as fast as we could I could hear myself breathing in and out slowly and other competitors were losing their breathing stances which slowed them down.
I quickly concentrate on myself, feeling empowerment that I was the only person running in this competition, my voice in my mind spoke to me so loud that it shut out the crow I ran my hardest to the finish line and I made
it, I did not stop running, the officials came running after me to give me first place.
I looked into the audience and shouted "I made it".
The End
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